Elephant Rant Rants, ahh.....
It was ok, I feel that the flash would've worked better as a collection of still images because what animation in this was crude. Drawings could've been cleaner.
The humour didn't really click with me and I'm not really one for rants.
In the end it was a very sloppy flash but it seems like you two had fun and thats what's important.
good job